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Starscream And Blade by SevenLevelsOfChaos

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This picture is very cute!!^^ one thing I absolutely love is the awesome background!! However, improvement can be made on the anatomy. The neck is a tad too long and the purple cats neck is too thin. I think you could have filled in the eyes of the other cat instead of just being all red. Like the black cat, the purple cat should have a pink blush and whiskers could be a little straighter with a pressure tip. I also noticed that the marking on the purple cats head is overlapping is eyes. Never more, it is such a sweet picture and I'm still lovin the background!^^
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SevenLevelsOfChaos Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you! 1. I totally agree on the anatomy. 2. The black cat's eyes are completly red. 3. I did mess up on the whiskers, it's kind of hard to draw with a mouse pad and 4. I completly agree with you!
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lalalalalaImaAnimal Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh yes, when I started I also used a mouse pad, it turned out horrible!! So I switched to traditional art^^ after a while, I got a tablet, so I'm back on digital art!^^ you're very welcome:D
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